{"id":5590,"date":"2017-08-14T18:06:06","date_gmt":"2017-08-15T01:06:06","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.markrkelly.com\/Blog\/?p=5590"},"modified":"2020-10-18T11:45:30","modified_gmt":"2020-10-18T18:45:30","slug":"the-instinct-can-be-fought-tos-24-a-taste-of-armageddon","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.markrkelly.com\/Blog\/2017\/08\/14\/the-instinct-can-be-fought-tos-24-a-taste-of-armageddon\/","title":{"rendered":"The Instinct Can Be Fought: TOS #24: \u201cA Taste of Armageddon\u201d"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>The Enterprise attempts to initiate diplomatic relations with a planet conducting a computer war with its neighbor planet, a war in which theoretical causalities voluntarily go to die in disintegration chambers.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.markrkelly.com\/Blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/08\/armageddon.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft wp-image-5582\" src=\"https:\/\/www.markrkelly.com\/Blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/08\/armageddon-300x225.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"677\" height=\"508\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.markrkelly.com\/Blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/08\/armageddon-300x225.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.markrkelly.com\/Blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/08\/armageddon-768x576.jpg 768w, https:\/\/www.markrkelly.com\/Blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/08\/armageddon.jpg 850w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 677px) 100vw, 677px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>This is one of Trek\u2019s <strong>best ethical conundrums<\/strong>, a contact with an alien civilization whose warrior ethical practices are not only problematic, but which threaten the Enterprise and its crew.<\/li>\n<li>The Enterprise is on its way to <strong>star cluster NGC 321<\/strong>, with a Federation ambassador on board, Robert Fox, whose mission is to establish diplomatic relations with the civilizations \u201cknown to be there\u201d. Fox wears a tight suit and comes across as stuffy.\n<ul>\n<li>We have here another example of Trek\u2019s rather <strong>haphazard approach<\/strong> to using astronomical names and designations. <strong>\u201cNGC\u201d<\/strong> is short for New General Catalogue (<a href=\"https:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/New_General_Catalogue\">https:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/New_General_Catalogue<\/a>), compiled in 1888 to list thousands of objects in the sky that included pretty much everything not obviously an ordinary star. Thus its contents include things we now know to be star clusters, galaxies, and planetary nebulae, all very different types of objects. Its designations are still used, as are Messier\u2019s (<a href=\"https:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Messier_object\">https:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Messier_object<\/a>), from a century earlier, when those designations are convenient to use.<\/li>\n<li>NGC 321 is, in fact, <strong>a spiral galaxy<\/strong> (<a href=\"https:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/NGC_321\">https:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/NGC_321<\/a>), which means it\u2019s completely outside our own galaxy, likely tens of millions of light years away (considering that the nearest spiral galaxy to our Milky Way, the Andromeda galaxy, is 2.5 million light years away), and so completely implausible as a target for the Enterprise\u2019s visit. Presumably the script writers chose it at random, as an astronomically plausible name.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<li>It\u2019s unclear what \u201cknown to be there\u201d implies; Kirk, in his opening log, mentions that the principle planet of the cluster is Eminiar Seven, and moments later Uhura receives a signal from that planet: Code 710. Meaning under no circumstances is the Enterprise to approach the planet.<\/li>\n<li>So, how does Eminiar Seven, whose culture the Federation has no contact with, <strong>know what Code 710 means?<\/strong> Perhaps they\u2019ve been vaguely aware of one another, but without that formal contact? Yet, to the extent that Eminiar knows Federations codes..?<\/li>\n<li>The ambassador insists the ship proceed, on the grounds that \u201cthousands of lives have been lost\u201d in the quadrant that might have been saved with a treaty port here.\n<ul>\n<li>The <strong>ambassador\/commissioner type character recurred several times<\/strong> in Trek (earlier in \u201cThe Galileo Seven,\u201d later in \u201cMetamorphosis\u201d), a convenient plot device to force the plot into an area Kirk\u2019s own judgement might not go.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<li>In Act I, Spock provides some background: the planet was contacted 50 years before, by an \u201cEarth expedition,\u201d the USS Valiant \u2013 a ship that failed to return. But it reported that Eminiar Seven was at war with its nearest neighbor, a planet later mentioned as Vendikar.\n<ul>\n<li>The recurrent reference to historical space missions as being from *Earth* begs the question of <strong>how the Federation came into existence<\/strong> \u2013 implying it was Earth\u2019s idea, that Earth gathered in other civilizations, like Vulcan\u2019s, to form the Federation. (All the Federation Commodores the Enterprise occasionally consults or takes orders from are human.) This might be an echo of the 1950s supposition, in SF in general but particularly in John W. Campbell\u2019s <em>Astounding<\/em> magazine of that era, that humans were by nature smarter and cleverer than any other aliens they might meet. It\u2019s insupportable; logically, it\u2019s far more likely that if similar species evolved on other planets and developed interstellar flight, there would have been many others that made that leap *before* humans did, and had a Federation already set up. Or, maybe the presumption was just a lack of imagination on Trek\u2019s part.<\/li>\n<li>There\u2019s another nomenclature issue. The name Eminiar Seven presumably means the 7<sup>th<\/sup> planet of the star Eminiar. What\u2019s Vendikar then? Another planet in the same system? Or a planet in some other system? Either way, <strong>why not a parallel name?<\/strong><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<li>Kirk and his party \u2013 leaving Ambassador Fox back on the ship, with Scotty in charge \u2013 beam down to the surface. There\u2019s a <strong>lovely scene<\/strong> combining a small soundstage set with a large matte background painting of an impressive futuristic city (<strong>see screen capture above<\/strong>), where the landing party appears, and is met by the locals.<\/li>\n<li>Naturally, <strong>the aliens speak English<\/strong>. With cultured British accents, even.<\/li>\n<li>Cushman\u2019s book notes that the sets look dated, like something from a Buck Rogers serial \u2013 and I agree, though not from seeing Buck Rogers, but from seeing some cheesy Sci-Fi movies from the \u201850s that had similar sets, especially those <strong>weirdly angled, impractical, doorways.<\/strong><\/li>\n<li>The landing party is met by a lovely woman (played by Barbara Babcock, who had several other roles in Trek&#8217;s first series) who calls herself Mea 3. She takes them to the Division of Control, an interior room where the leader, Anan 7 (played by the exotic and intense David Opatoshu), announces that his planet has been <strong>at war with Vendikar for *500 years* (!)<\/strong> and that they, and the Enterprise, are in imminent danger.<\/li>\n<li>The situation quickly unfolds. The discussion with Anan 7 is interrupted by an apparent attack on the city, by fusion bomb; Anan 7 steps into an adjoining war room. A map displays a hit, in the city. (A crude blob of light on a crude map.) Kirk and party hear nothing, detect no radiation. Spock observes and deduces the situation: <strong>the war is simulated, fought by computers.<\/strong> Anan insists the war is real: half a million people have just been killed \u2013 and will report to disintegration machines within 24 hours.<\/li>\n<li>This way people die, but their civilization goes on.<\/li>\n<li><strong>Kirk is aghast.<\/strong> \u201cDo you mean to tell me\u2026 your people just walk into a disintegration machine when they\u2019re told to??\u201d<\/li>\n<li>But Spock sees a certain logic to it; yet he says \u201cI do not approve. I understand.\u201d<\/li>\n<li>But Anan has been advised by his assistant Sar \u2013 \u201cJust as it happened 50 years ago\u201d \u2013 that the Enterprise, in orbit, has been registered has the target of a cobalt-bomb, and classified as destroyed. Its passengers and crew, Anan tells Kirk, are to report to disintegration chambers. <strong>They are already dead.<\/strong><\/li>\n<li>The situation and premise established early on, by the end of Act I, the middle of the episode consists of routine action scenes and ploys. An attack from the surface cuts off the Enterprise from rescuing the landing party (and simply leaving); Kirk and the landing party break out of their confinement quarters, and destroy a disintegration machine or two.\n<ul>\n<li>One of these scenes includes Spock\u2019s priceless line, as he walks up to a guard by a disintegration machine, <strong>\u201cSir, there is a multi-legged creature crawling on your shoulder.\u201d<\/strong> \u2013 a brief distraction than enables Spock to nerve-pinch the guard.<\/li>\n<li>The Enterprise is subject to \u201csonic vibrations\u201d and navigator DePaul describes them as \u201cDecibels eighteen to the twelfth power.\u201d Another little bit of <strong>Trek\u2019s mathematical illiteracy.<\/strong><\/li>\n<li>But this development is another way Trek episodes <strong>forced the plot:<\/strong> Kirk, standing in for the Federation, is nominally for the non-interference of other civilizations, yet again and again, the plot forces Kirk into interfering anyway, just to save his ship.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<li>A recurring here theme is the<strong> credulousness of Ambassador Fox<\/strong>. Anan 7, who somehow can mimic Kirk\u2019s voice, contacts the Enterprise and assures them all is well. Moreover, that the crew is all invited down for shore leave! Fox, believing this voice, tells Scott to lower the shields. Scott refuses. Fox gets angry. Scott still refuses.<\/li>\n<li>Meanwhile, on the planet, <strong>the situation culminates<\/strong> with a confrontation between Kirk and Anan, about <strong>the ethics of fighting a war with no long-term consequences<\/strong> \u2013 only the immediate formalistic consequences of citizens committing to voluntary suicide, for the good of the state. <strong>This is one of Trek\u2019s best ethical debates.<\/strong> The stakes are raised as Kirk gets a brief communication to the Enterprise to order General Order 24 \u2013 meaning that, unless the Enterprise hears back from Kirk, the ship will destroy the surface of the planet in 2 hours.<\/li>\n<li>Kirk expounds. \u201c<strong>Death\u2026 destruction\u2026 disease, horror\u2026 That\u2019s what war is all about. <em>That\u2019s what makes it a thing to be avoided<\/em>.<\/strong> You\u2019ve made it neat and painless&#8230; so neat and painless, you\u2019ve had no reason to stop it. And you\u2019ve had it for five hundred years! Since it seems to be the only way I can save my crew, and my ship, I\u2019m going to end it for you.\u201d<\/li>\n<li>And so Kirk and Spock destroy, with their phasers, the war room computers.<\/li>\n<li>This explicitly breaks the contact and agreement between Eminiar and Vendikar, and Kirk advises Anan 7 that a *real* war might likely ensue, with <strong>real weapons that would actually destroy their planet<\/strong> \u2013 unless they try to make peace.<\/li>\n<li><strong>And here\u2019s a key thought.<\/strong> Anan insists \u201cThere can be no peace! Don\u2019t you see, we\u2019ve admitted it to ourselves! We\u2019re a killer species; it\u2019s instinctive\u2014it\u2019s the same with you, your General Order 24!\u201d<\/li>\n<li>And Kirk gets the best lines: \u201c<strong>All right, it\u2019s instinctive. But the instinct can be fought.<\/strong> We\u2019re human beings, with the blood of a million savage years on our hands. But we can stop it! We can admit that we\u2019re killers \u2013 but we\u2019re not going to kill, today. That\u2019s all it takes. <strong>Knowing that we\u2019re not going to kill \u2013 <em>today<\/em>!<\/strong>\u201d<\/li>\n<li>And Kirk urges them to contact Vendikar and enter negotiations for peace. Ambassador Fox is there to volunteer his help.<\/li>\n<li>The tag scene, on the bridge, underscores Kirk\u2019s ploy. \u201cIt was a calculated risk&#8230; I had a feeling that they [the Eminians] would do anything to avoid [actual war] \u2013 even talk peace.\u201d<\/li>\n<li>Ending with a relatively mild Gene L. Coon quip about believing in luck, or miracles.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Memory Alpha summary: <a href=\"http:\/\/memory-alpha.wikia.com\/wiki\/A_Taste_of_Armageddon_(episode)\">http:\/\/memory-alpha.wikia.com\/wiki\/A_Taste_of_Armageddon_(episode)<\/a><\/p>\n<p>The crucial theme here is relevant to our times. We understand, much more deeply than anyone understood in 1967, that human nature has certain instincts, that might be lived with, and understood, yet which <i>should be<\/i> overcome, for the health of a multicultural, global society, which is inevitable, as the human race expands to fill up the planet. This theme applies to the recent violence in Charlottesville. Do we presume that all our base instincts are true and must be acted upon? Or do we try to understand them and rise above them?<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Blish\u2019s adaptation, in ST2:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Blish\u2019s version follows the script closely, though again he <strong>collapses initial scenes<\/strong> into a prose introduction, cutting to the introduction to Anan 7 before introducing any dialogue.<\/li>\n<li>Minor bit: the female Yeoman in the landing party is Manning, not Tamura.<\/li>\n<li>Presumably the script has some specific directions for how particular scenes or actors would play; in any case Blish\u2019s own adjectives seem preternaturally precise, compared to how they came across on screen: Mea Three\u2019s (Blish spells out all the numbers in the Eminiar names) manner is \u201ccool, but correct\u201d; Anan speaks about causalities \u201cevenly.\u201d<\/li>\n<li>When Kirk confronts Anan Seven in the latter\u2019s quarters, Blish omits the transparent ploy by Anan and the subsequent fist-fight between Kirk and an Eminian guard in the corridor. <strong>Blish tended to omit or gloss over action scenes<\/strong>, which aren\u2019t nearly exciting in prose as perhaps they were on screen (even as they look a bit anachronistic, by TNG standards).<\/li>\n<li>Mention is made, near the end, of the name of the head of the Vendikar High Council: Ripoma.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>The Enterprise attempts to initiate diplomatic relations with a planet conducting a computer war with its neighbor planet, a war in which theoretical causalities voluntarily go to die in disintegration chambers. 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